Haunted

Haunted

A Poem by *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Heavy beating of the heart,

A pounding drum within my ear.

Shadows dance and mingle,

As they prey upon my fears.

 

Breathless frozen air,

Fills the room in a cold steam.

Whispers echo in the darkness,

Awaken when I need to dream.

 

Eerie feelings linger close,

Eyes stare in frightening glance.

Tormented by this undying soul,

A victim of a dead romance.

 

Crimson tears, lifeless regrets

In an unchangeable past.

My only hope for you,

May you rest in peace at last.

 

© 2012 *~*Butterfly Kisses*~*


Author's Note

*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
A bit of therapy for me, as upon my hospital return I recently had a suicide happen in my apartment building. This also was never meant to rhyme.

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Now this one I like it leaves me wanting more to read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can hear the "haunted nature" you have hear. I'm also sorry about your neighbor, but you wrote a beautiful piece here... When I first read it I thought of a kid waking up from a nightmare in a dark room and scary images... I liked it. Lovely write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hauntingly beautiful...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Love and fear linger, and haunt the chilled air we share .. Empathetic souls are forever moved to tears .. by untimely desperate demise ..

Well done .. Jazz

Posted 12 Years Ago


Evocative, powerful, and with veins coursing with sorrow and pain that is so strong, the emotion practically bleeds from the poem. Thank you so much for sharing this, it was a wonderful read. Hauntingly beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


It's sad when people choose death over the God-given choice to correct wrongdoings of life...but sometimes people chose the other way.. your poem brings to life the horrors that elude many of the simple joys of life... the way you have rhymed without intending to do do only shows how deeply affected you were by this incident! Well written Anna

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hearing something so sad about suicide can leave us with question of why did it happen? Very emotional write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very sad and emotional! The poem the ending gives peace and healing to others!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Death make us learn how precious life is. The poem told a sad tale with a sad ending. Sad to learn of a suicide. Hard to understand why someone would think death was sweeter then life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*
*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*

Somewhere between TN and NYC, TN



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My name is Anna Rose... what can I say about myself? I'm 20 learning to live on my own, trying to escape from a dark part of my life. Been writing my heart since I was able to write. I write whate.. more..

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