Sorry I've Been Gone so Long.

sorry i have been on for a while guys

Sorry I've been gone so long,

For I had to take a break.

The stress was so heavy on my shoulders,

I didn't know how much more I could take.

Sorry I've been gone so long,

It was all too much.

Everything was falling on me and out from under me,

For it hurt with the littlest touch.

Sorry I've been gone so long,

I thought I should just give up.

Fly away with the wind and escape through the music,

For I was just a sad pup.

Sorry I've been gone so long,

I can't begin to talk about everything that has happen.

I've decided to pull through,

And just keep laughing.

Sorry I've been gone so long,

I am back now.

I'll try to stay for a while,

I still don't know how..

Author's Note

Just keep laughing;)

Reviews

[Stefanie Holmes]

I love that this piece can be interpreted in a variety of different ways. Really makes the readers' mind go a million miles an hour thinking of possibilities! Great job Katherine!

~Stefanie

[Fire Mage Andrea]

do you feel better now ? have a hug

[Katherine]

thank you so much and yeah alot better:)

[Emily]

I love the meaning of it!! Well done!

[Katherine]

Thank you so much

[Jennie Baron]

You do have the knack of using repetition. I also like that this poem makes the reader think. I could read it a number of times and still come up with different interpretations. Good job!

[Katherine]

Thank you it means alot:)

[stars are far]

That was very amazing.
well done and your repetition was very well portrayed to convey the message :D

[Katherine]

Thank you and I didnt know if it would be too much or not

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of repetition. You made your point. Thank you for sharing the poetry.
Coyote

[Katherine]

Thank you so much

[Fire Mage Andrea]

good stuff this. is it based on how you actually feel or how a character feels?

[Katherine]

It is based on me;) and thank you