Heaven

My opinion

Heaven

Sometimes I wonder,

"What is it like up there, in heaven?"

Is it calm and happy?

Or is it make believe?

It doesn't matter what religion I am.

I will always wonder.

Now Some people say it's beautiful.

I would not care if it was ugly.

Some people say it's tranquil.

But, how should they know?

Some say it's not real.

Then when we die,

Where shall we go?

If there is no heaven-

There is no hell.

At first I thought it would be lovely,

To see Him,

To see my passed family.

When I think to long,

I get scared.

No longer here.

Literally Non-existent.

I wish I could just go there,

Experience it,

Then come back.

Now only one child has done that.

Author's Note

Idunno my take on heaven.

Reviews

[EmilyBianca]

I think the same things, and a lot too! I always wonder what a heaven or hell would be like. I also wonder what limbo would be like as well.

[Jennie Baron]

A beautiful take on Heaven and so well and succinctly put. I give a lot of thought to what it might be like, too, and was even considering a story line where a character wakes up and finds himself in Heaven.

(Oh, by the way, "when I think to long" should be "when I think too long." I hate to be picky but I noticed that almost immediately.)

[melissa]

Amazing poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more

[Bluefire]

This clearly sets the mind to wondering.
What is Heaven like? Does it exist? Who else is there besides our Lord?
Thought provoking and intriguing. That last line gave me chills.
Well done. ^^

[Emily]

This has to be my favorite poem that you have written! Good job!