Alone

Just another poem

I feel so alone.
She's actually left so many times
Yet I go back
I always do

Its like im invisible
Like I don't have a real heart
That you continueously break apart
Or emotions.
No of course Im not sad
Of course im not dying inside.
Right?

Face reality
Shes not your friend
The voices keep telling you
"Its true; you know, what she said."
You think it is...

Youre going mad
Crazy you could say
The tears never stop
The voices getting louder
The saddness growing stronger.

No one cares
No one helps
Because you fake that smile
That big old smile
That hurts your cheeks you try so hard

Your throat aching from choking back the tears..
Help.
Help please..
No one will hear you..
No one ever does.

Author's Note

Sorry its so depressing its my current mood:(

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Very emotionally powerful presentation and choice of words here. Very expressive of the mood you are trying to convey. Well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Better to hide sadness. Few people will care. Our sorrow is shared with very few people. I like the thoughts and the struggle in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Stefanie Holmes]

That you continueously break apart. The correct spelling is 'continuously'.

I could tell you put a lot of emotion in this write and it certainly conveyed a deep pain.

~Stefanie

[Wolfwind]

Your words are filled with deep emotions. Your words ask questions and answer them as they flow down the page. Being an outside eye looking at these words for the first time, some lines stand out to me more than others. Those lines bring a question to mind, one that I'm always asking myself. "Are they really not hearing what I speak, or is it that I'm not getting the answers from the right people?"
The last two lines are perhaps the most powerful of those that make me muse... for that very question has made me ask this question to myself many times, "Do I really wan't people to react to act upon what I speak, or do I just wish they would at least stand still long enough to make me believe they are listening."

I can certainly relate to tears at times for thoughts similar to those that you've expressed. Hopefully being able to purge those emotions upon the page of ink, helps bring to life more rays of sunshine.

Thanks for sharing your ink!
Wolfwind

[Katherine]

Thank you so much for the review! and not many people really truely feel what I feel theyre just like everyone else saying, I feel you or I get that.. but you seem to do so! thank youu

[Wolfwind]

You are very welcome.

[Fire Mage Andrea]

It's very emotive. I feel I need to give this person a hug to make them feel better.
The other character -("She's actually left so many times") seems so heartless
Looking forward to reading your happier stuff 80)

[Katherine]

Thank you!