Let me in.

Let me in.

A Poem by Kat Loch

Let me in.

Let me sketch on your bare back and let me write my favorite lyrics on your arms.

Tell me what you’re afraid of and why.

Tell me about the darkest part of your life and let me shine my light in.

Let me fill up space in your chest, like fog in the early autumn mornings.

Let me take you�"naked and vulnerable�"into my arms and trust that I won’t let go.

Let me plant orchids in your ribcage and let me water them daily with kisses;

I promise I won’t let them die.

Let me leave lipstick marks on your knuckles and your neck.

Tell me who you think God is.

Tell me what you do when you’ve hit rock bottom.

Tell me what your favorite quote means to you.

Tell me your favorite memory.

Sit with me under the orange streetlights and tell me secrets that no one else knows.

Let me under your skin and into your bloodstream.

I promise I won’t leave you curled in a corner, nursing dead flowers and dead thoughts.

© 2013 Kat Loch


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Kat Loch
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Woooaah. Very passionate poem. The detail and literary devices used in this poem really enthralls me. I loved this part "Let me plant orchids in your ribcage and let me water them daily with kisses;
I promise I won’t let them die." as well as this part here "Tell me your favorite memory.
Sit with me under the orange streetlights and tell me secrets that no one else knows.
Let me under your skin and into your bloodstream.
I promise I won’t leave you curled in a corner, nursing dead flowers and dead thoughts." I read every line and it made me want to read more. Well written poem Kat


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kat Loch

10 Years Ago

Aaaww! Thank you! :D this made me really happy. Hehe.
Chaos_Collector

10 Years Ago

You're welcome Kat. I'm glad I could make you happy :) Merry Christmas!



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Love is in your heart, in your soul and even in every single blood cell flowing in your veins..i can sense that while reading your words, hope your guy understand the value of being loved and how lucky he is to be in your presence...beautiful work


Posted 10 Years Ago


Lol ... Intoxicating! I`m thrilled to have this write because the combination of words comparing with the seasons of life ~~ is pretty good even much interesting to read. You`re here dispersing the sheds of your talent through words. Very good! I appreciate it .. even though I appreciate your talent, Sweety ... I`m going to read your some more stuffs right now!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Woooaah. Very passionate poem. The detail and literary devices used in this poem really enthralls me. I loved this part "Let me plant orchids in your ribcage and let me water them daily with kisses;
I promise I won’t let them die." as well as this part here "Tell me your favorite memory.
Sit with me under the orange streetlights and tell me secrets that no one else knows.
Let me under your skin and into your bloodstream.
I promise I won’t leave you curled in a corner, nursing dead flowers and dead thoughts." I read every line and it made me want to read more. Well written poem Kat


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kat Loch

10 Years Ago

Aaaww! Thank you! :D this made me really happy. Hehe.
Chaos_Collector

10 Years Ago

You're welcome Kat. I'm glad I could make you happy :) Merry Christmas!

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Kat Loch
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I've learned my lessons and burned them into my heart. Here I am again, trying to live like no bad had ever happened and trying to reteach myself to forget and only hold onto what's actually going to .. more..

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A Poem by Kat Loch