Chocolate Ice Cream (Not Continued)
A Book by ApplesAreAmazing
 15 year old Eva Hall expected her third year of High School to pass by in a blur. After all, nothing interesting had happened in her Freshmen and Sophomore years. But being a Junior is much different.  © 2014 ApplesAreAmazing
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© BurningEmbers(ApplesAreAmazing)2013, All Rights Reserved
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I do like this book. It's a sweet story of a typical teenage girl and her BFFs surviving high school together. There's boys and homework; it's what every teenage girl experiences. I like how you made the character's personality simple instead of making it wishy washy. Eva is a curious and intelligent girl while Krystal is a loyal and protective person and Tiana is spunky and daring. However the boys' personality is less obvious and I think you should make them more prominent. I also like how you add suspense every so often. That's what makes a book good in the first place, right :)?
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for the comment! I'm going to do some major editing later on, so I'll be sure to follow yo.. read moreThank you for the comment! I'm going to do some major editing later on, so I'll be sure to follow your suggestion!
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11 Years Ago
Oh okay then. Post a link when you do, will ya :)?
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11 Years Ago
Of course =)
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I do like this book. It's a sweet story of a typical teenage girl and her BFFs surviving high school together. There's boys and homework; it's what every teenage girl experiences. I like how you made the character's personality simple instead of making it wishy washy. Eva is a curious and intelligent girl while Krystal is a loyal and protective person and Tiana is spunky and daring. However the boys' personality is less obvious and I think you should make them more prominent. I also like how you add suspense every so often. That's what makes a book good in the first place, right :)?
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for the comment! I'm going to do some major editing later on, so I'll be sure to follow yo.. read moreThank you for the comment! I'm going to do some major editing later on, so I'll be sure to follow your suggestion!
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11 Years Ago
Oh okay then. Post a link when you do, will ya :)?
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11 Years Ago
Of course =)
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OMy ! You've got quite a few chapters here ! OK, I'll bite - peeking into your first entry ... ^.^
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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My name is Eva, and I'm 12 years old. I really love music and I can sing all day, even if people don't like my singing. I don't judge peopl.. more..
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