Raven

Raven

A Poem by David Burke
"

for a wonderful friend I met recently

"

Raven is a person, that time could never erase.

She will not be forgotten, and she cannot be replaced.

Not just because of her smile, or her pretty face;

but because of her soul, and the joy it creates.

She's one of those people, I guess you might say,

that god brings to your life when you have a bad day.

She has so many stories, that I have not yet heard.

Yet she brings me a smile with just one single word.

She's like so many people I'm close to these days.

The kind of people who've changed me in so many ways.

So I shall cherish our time, from now till the end.

In my life you are welcome, my wonderful friend. 

© 2014 David Burke


Author's Note

David Burke
written for Raven Dodson

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That is a very sweet poem for your friend. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Burke

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
oh… that is so cute she is so lucky she has a friend like you

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Burke

10 Years Ago

Yeah she a pretty good friend lol
aw ^-^ this is so adorable. I love your wording so much (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Burke

10 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Beautiful way to pay tribute to someone you admire your writing simply elegant...and thank you for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Burke

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words
I'm a friend of hers as well...couldn't have said it better myself!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Burke

10 Years Ago

I had no idea you were on here :P and thanks lol we haven't known each other long, but she's helped .. read more

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Added on March 19, 2014
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David Burke
David Burke

Winchester, VA



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