Love

read the title :P

Love is amazing, a pure creation 

With no racial barriers, or Qualifications

She truly is a magnificent girl

Who has the power to unite the world

She's the only lady on this earth

That can prove to you how much she's worth

She's born every day, and yet she's centuries old

And still she's so beautiful, more precious than gold

She'll fill you with feelings so good you can't stand it

Because she is the paint, and your heart is her canvas

She is the ink with which Shakespeare wrote

That helped his Juliet find her Romeo

She's the only thing that keeps your heart whole

And can only be found in the core of your soul

She is that lady, that grabs our attention

And she is most definitely god's greatest invention

So if you ever meet her, don't be scared or embarrassed

Because she's just a woman who just wants to be cherished

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Abdul Aziz]

Definitely, man! I think this is exactly the poem I've wanted to write. "she's born every day, and yet she's centuries old", "she is most definitely god's greatest invention", although invention seems a tad forced, are my favourite lines in the poem. You express your thoughts clearly and concisely, which is often needed in poetry! Well done and keep writing.

[Child of God]

Thank you so much :)

[Laura Harrison]

This is so beautiful, I just love your writing so much, Ryan

[Child of God]

thank you :)

[Kenaz]

Perfect personification of love. I was not wrong about you. I found myself reading this poem, not even realizing the rhymes. They are so well done.

[Child of God]

Thank you so much :)

[Calibaster]

That is soooooooo TRUE! I love it! You have a way with words that I seriously have never witnessed before! Really, you're fantastic! I love it! ;)

[Child of God]

Thank you so much, that really means alot

[Calibaster]

No problem!!!

[oscar douglas]

Bravo! I in person do not poem,but this one..................this one caught my attention. n oh,overflowing,from an edge..cool .. Better work next piece... n don't stop writing!

[Child of God]

Thank you that means alot

[oscar douglas]

Do you major in poems??

[oscar douglas]

Do you major in poems??

[Child of God]

actually no

[oscar douglas]

So what's your major?-n why?

[Child of God]

im sorry I meant yes read your question wrong

[April Mitchell]

I love how there is more than one interpretation that can be extracted from this magnificent post!This piece has captured my heart!

[Child of God]

You just made my day thank you so much I really needed that :)

[annabellee]

I liked how you described love as a person, great idea, really.
Lovely write :)

[Child of God]

Thanks lol :) I decided to describe her as a woman, because they are delicate and gentle creatures and in my opinion are the perfect examples of love's grace and kindness

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[justin bluebuds]

hi mate, looked through your poems read this one first, liked it muchly, i liked this bit 'shes born everyday and centuries old' sorta turning point in the poem, as it lets you in on the point, shes every woman, yeah?? justin x

[Child of God]

exactly lol good look lol

[Sarah Lynn]

I thought it was another great poem as usual ! Why the message earlier ? lol the only thing i would change is the where it says " gods greatest invention" i would change invention to creation. just my personal opinion. lol but i loved it (:

[Child of God]

I was going to do that, but I didn't want to use creation twice lol but thanks for the advice and I sent that because I honestly thought I botched it

[Sarah Lynn]

Noo its good ! Your poems are always good. I know what you mean about the same word wice though , i caved and did it in one of my poems and it still turned out great though ! lol

[Child of God]

I see your point lol yours always turn out great :)