Thank You.

Thank You.

A Poem by xxxrawr_friendxxx
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I wrote this a couple months ago when I was...not good. My friend was there for me when I wasn't even there for myself. Thank You is the only thing I can think for a title. (:

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When I saw myself,

I was stained.

My body covered with incurable pain.

Why am I upset?

Hearts were made for stealing.

I wanted to hide forever,

But your love overcomes that feeling.

I couldn't see,

I was so blind.

But my heart wasn't meant to be stolen,

It was made for you to find.

                 <3

© 2012 xxxrawr_friendxxx


Author's Note

xxxrawr_friendxxx
This is rather old. Dedicated to someone insane and awesome! :D

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Really well written. You described your feelings really well and described what was going on in a way that wasn't extremely difficult to understand. I actually really love this poem. Great work! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ah, a fine poem indeed. The person receiving this must have been impressed with this. It is a sweet poem indeed, especially the last line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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