I'll fly with you.

I'll fly with you.

A Poem by xxxrawr_friendxxx
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c:

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***Age 13***

 

The moon and the sun

We rise above

Like angels

Drowning in the confusion

Faster

Our hearts race

Float through space and shed our tears

Touching

Plush

Loving like a melody

Tripping over the words

Melancholy

Sullen

Return to where we came from

© 2012 xxxrawr_friendxxx


Author's Note

xxxrawr_friendxxx
That one dude, over there. *points in no general direction at all*

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so short and sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great poem. Keep up the good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


xxxrawr_friendxxx

12 Years Ago

Thank you c:
wow this was utterly awesome nice work friend and i love you too haahaha

Posted 12 Years Ago


xxxrawr_friendxxx

12 Years Ago

Hahahahaha awwwhh thank you X3
koty bell

12 Years Ago

if u have the chance could u check out some of my work maybe???hehe
xxxrawr_friendxxx

12 Years Ago

Of course!!1! :D
Nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


xxxrawr_friendxxx

12 Years Ago

Thanks :3
This is sweet, short, deep and original.

WELL DONE

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 22, 2012
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Tags: love, flying, space, sky, happy, melancholy, sullen, angels, moon, sun, drowning, confusion, tears. touching, plush, melody

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Melancholy Hill, Plastic Beach



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