Is A Thought Still A Thought

I wrote this sometime last year; I just found it in an old sketchbook C:

I was told the tale of a liar, a thief;

A story of your stolen heart, in which you refuse to believe.

Who am I to lie to you,

My love,

Even if you deny the truth?

Who am I,

To have use of a mind,

To have the ability of speech?

I am only yours, if you'll allow me to be.

I massacre my heart to give to you

And wash away the sins to renew my love.

But, those who deny the reality,

Aren't they the untruthful ones, themselves?

My body whimpers for your own slander, 

And for your disbelief. 

You smile into my words,

A flash of pure betrayal.

I suppose we'll always be locked away in each other's hearts

Reviews

[HadesRising]

Good piece of writing. Well Done.

[Tai Ryens]

A liar, a thief, but not just that, but two. Classic twist evidenced by the fact that both of your hearts are trapped in the other. What a painful situation. Well done.

[danish]

Love your writings keep it up....

[ethann]

that was really good! :DD

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Thanks! :D