Undescribable...

Woo, sloppy seconds. Have fun with your achievement.

You deserve everything you get,

I just want you to know.

Are you really that much of a.....

And no one else sees a problem with this?

Maybe they don't care enough to open their eyes;

I certainly don't blame them.

Who could escape the beautiful scenery

Scratched on the back of their eyelids

For your cruel, twisted cage of a dream?

Only someone who's been battle hardened.

Somone as cold as a nightmare.

 

Do you see what you've done to me?

To everyone around you?

You are so.....

You have to take whatever we don't want,

Whatever we've left behind.

 

Reviews

[Bats In The Belfry]

I like where you are headed with this..."Who could escape the beautiful scenery, Scratched on the back of their eyelids" Love this line, great descriptive choice of words produces great imagery. I can feel the heat of anger...keep going!

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Thanks! I will! :D

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

I KNOW that isn't the end. I just got so... flustered that I decided to stop.