A choice

A choice

A Poem by xxxrawr_friendxxx
"

I was trying to show that she has to kill someone; it could be herself. But she decides not to- Why? Is she being selfish or does she care about others?

"

An over-analystic artist

With the burden of decisions to make.

Her love, herself, and a stranger

Whose life should she take?

 

Her mind as her inspiration,

She holds a razor to her wrist

"Why would I ruin a beautiul life

When I can choose to do this?"

 

"A puddle of my own blood is better

Than making someone else's a lake."

But is she thinking of only herself

Or keeping someone innocent safe?

© 2012 xxxrawr_friendxxx


Author's Note

xxxrawr_friendxxx
I don't usually write poems that rhyme so sorry if it sucks.

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it didn't suck. it was pretty good. especially the ending. idk if its you're first time writing with rhyme but keep at it. you're good at it

Posted 12 Years Ago


Interesting poem. I'd just take my own life if it were me. Sounds like she doesn't want any blood on her hands, but can handle her own.

Posted 12 Years Ago


xxxrawr_friendxxx

12 Years Ago

Yep. Thanks for reviewing :3

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