You Don't Even Understand

I'm cold... May I have a hug?

I forgave you for your mistake;

Was mine so different?

I sincerely apologize.

But you don't say anything.

What more could you want?

What more could you need?

I'll give it to you.

I bleed. 

For you.

If there's a tomorrow

Will you watch as I drain?

Reviews

[Dark Tower]

Short and thought provoking. Well written.

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Thanks! :D

[Owlgirl]

I think that this is exceptional. There is certainly more than one interpretation running in my mind. Great job, emotionally heartbreaking, different parts are easily relatable, and all together it's excelltent and going in my library. :)

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Thanks so much :'D

[Tai Ryens]

Intense emotions indeed; I love how instead of a fall you portray yourself being drained. Excellent.

[nigrum homonculus]

who that was short but intense. the title is very fitting for the mood here. especially
"I bleed. For you." line. oddly i can relate to this aswell. really good. well done.

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Thanks. :3 I really just don't think he understands.

[That_Girl]

Short and sweet. Enjoyable. :)