Open your eyes

Open your eyes

A Poem by Bailiegh

 Open your eyes
Open your eyes

What do you see?

I see a girl
A girl who is trapped
Trapped and alone

Who is she?

She is me
I am her

Is she okay?

No
She wants to leave and never come back
She hurts
She reaches out for help but nobody is there
What is she to do, but sit and stare

Open your eyes
Open your eyes

What do you see?


© 2014 Bailiegh


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Beautiful imagery, It was a fun to read your poem!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

breathtaking, vivid, thought provoking

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Bailiegh
Bailiegh

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A Poem by Bailiegh