A Better Me

A Better Me

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown

 

He praised the disregard her beauty showed
to time and synthetic treatment. He sent
his applause and cheers through caresses
and kisses that coaxed the most pleasant of tears
and after the appreciation and laughter
he declared…
 
you deserve better…
 
He listened to he deepest wounds and fears
that her soul seemed to wallow and walk in
and then gave her a safe escape. A way to wake
from a traumatizing dreamscape of great
pains and trustless games with no gains. Then
he said…
 
you deserve better…
 
He turned her every saying and movement
into the greatest art for the world to see
displaying her curves with the loveliest
words and visions that immortalized her
and as she posed for him on this pedestal
he sighed…
 
you deserve better…
 
He offered her a love so supreme
as he swung and kicked back past hurtful things
tortured by his anger of old and his own fears
untold he wept as she applauded his every move
and as she was stunned by his sadness
he said…
 
you deserve a better me…

© 2009 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


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BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown
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