You Don't Even Know

Ah to crave some one who doesn't even know you're interested. Very interesting to see how powerful those emotions can be...

 

I am the scavenger of her life

the rabid fan without a stadium in which to stand

Every day I speak with her

an elite club of trust I’m in

so, she unleashes the tidbits of bliss

that on weekends I sorely miss

and my heart is soothed

by the seductive prr in her voice

the exciting curves in every word

they play with my thoughts

reruns and fantasies fill my daydreams

as I mold her story to one filled with me

as I file her story to permanent memory

simply a gauge I use

simply data that’ll prove

my timing of her heart’s enlighting-

ment that I was sent

to be that special ONE

 

Oh if she knew…

 

I am the scavenger of her emotion

drink it up, drink it in

and then it feeds her beautiful

a sculpture of her forged by my rapture

a mosaic of instant gorgeous

as I see her in oblivious moments

sighs of my desire in every minute spent

in her field of view

and to stay there I’d do

whatever it takes for the chance to bake

that eye-opening smile

when she finally sees

me as HER me instead of invisibly

cause her mere greeting makes me fly

and just one missed makes me die

acknowledge me and verify my smile

cause I need to believe my existence

is somehow meant for her

 

Oh if she only knew…

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

My brother you are holding out. You need to invite her to a spoken word spot and hit her dead in the face with this awesome piece of poetry. No brother this is art. I am glad it is not my woman you want. I enjoyed this poem. I could highlight the whole thing to express what lines motivated me but I will focus on these two sets;

reruns and fantasies fill my daydreamsas
I mold her story to one filled with meas
I file her story to permanent memory

that eye-opening smile
when she finally sees me
as HER me instead of invisibly

Lines like this backin the 70 and 80 would cause women to throw their panties up on the stage. Great lines. I would not hold out if you wrote this about a female. I would drop it on her some how and then write goofy love poems after she is yours. Great write. Thanks for the read requests. Check out a piece I wrote title "The Way" Same thought just not as smooth as yours. Peace.