Futile

Futile

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown
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Mornings are best served when the program is disturbed ;-)

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And as I said goodbye
she simply said “No”
the grip from her heart simply wouldn’t let go
her passion and desire kicked and screamed
as her eyes held dual swords of determination
and my plans became likened to battle
 
it seemed
as if every attempt I made to depart
attacked and wounded her gentle heart
I couldn’t move watching her battle start
a dance unrehearsed of fluid flailing about
was the course her love took and it had me shook
strikes and poses of a caring warning took
me out of my programmed daily cool
 
She came close and her touch ignited
“But, baby, I gotta…”
the flames consumed my breath
couldn’t fight the flames so I started to sweat
glanced down into her eyes and she pleaded,
 
“Don’t let me scrounge around for leftover pieces”
Our romantic past legend had left lustful remains
her lips wanted revenge for the beautiful destruction I give
I gave and as her hips swayed her intense look laid me down
 
VENGENANCE IS MINE
became the line her heart repeated
and as her heart greeted me again
my breath returned to finish the line…
“…go to work”

 

© 2008 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


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Ahh talk about a beautiful battle!

( And this right here is the reason why im anticipating your new book .)

Love Lives :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

what i wouldn't give to have this happen to me.

good job. I love the "battle" and how it is drawn out.

good job.
cole-

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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