His Space

This was one of those weekend-wake-up-warm-in-a-comfy-bed and think of past lovers moments. I then decided to flip the script and visualize what 'she' might do with the same feeling ;-) (photo from www.123rf.com/stock-photo/rejected_emotion.html)

 

A beautiful day ended
she slipped into bed with all stress rescended
nuzzled her pillow and her hands traced the sheets
she sighed deeply as the empty side and her hand meets
her eyes welled and peace drained from her face
"I miss him so much, cause this was his space"

Her wet dreams stalked him
she enslaved his memory to her every whim
"In you, with you, for you, love you" is all he said
each word she quivered as "yes" is all that filled her head
her hand reached her thighs and up into that place
she moaned as she wept and whispered "This was his space"

She woke in a pool of sweat
a wet-mare of pleasure and pain as she slept
breathless she searched her cold and empty room
wishing for that hug that she could sleep in til noon
she dried her longing eyes knowing his love she can't replace
and went back to sleep to dream of him filling that space...

Reviews

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

Wow that was intriguing..i was not expecting that second section..ecspecially that ending part lol..but i liked it alot..i think your words were inticing..you had me captured from the first couple of lines which made me want to read more of the poem..i like that you used descriptive words, you explained it well and used good words to create visuals in your readers head..it made me a bit sad i must say because she is missing her love and she is obviously lonely without him..i think you portrayed the characters P.O.V. very well i felt here pain..great write..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s