A Walk With Me

A Walk With Me

A Poem by BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown
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Honestly I'm not certain where this piece came from. It's one of those moments where I had a scene in mind while driving and a line came to mind.

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bathed in the filth of failure

I sigh and smile

and you are there

in me and beside me

 

cradling your forearm we walk

you cry and smile

imperfect beach of broken shells

comforting warm sand

 

these shores lacking fear

I breathe and smile

sweet sea of possibilities

waves of welcome hope

 

piercing the fog about us

I lead all while

you carry my direction

cradling our forgotten passion

 

and the sun leaves

reminders of then

burns of now

and vision of later

 

with u

© 2013 BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown


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Wonderful...love the emotion~

Posted 11 Years Ago


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BJ "Bunneh3000" Brown
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Engineer by day, passionate poet during all points in between... Sex, love, music, life, movies, and my loving wife Adrianne inspire my moments of poetic bliss. Hoping to improve my writing a.. more..

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