HER... in pieces

Next time, watch her. Really watch her when she responds to you. Cause at that moment, that glow she shines.... is just for u

 

Her hugs hunger me as if sister to moonlit rainy evenings

forcing a harvest of passion and peace to drink

can’t let go

 

Her kiss powders chocolate with intensity’s wet dreams

centuries of concentrated joy-polished chaos

                   can’t let go

 

Her body silences my lyricism with thick beats

full throttle passion model that melts my heavy metal

                   where’s my treble

 

Her legs chisel bass percussion for my dreams to follow

repetitious longing dripping with the dawn turned plush

                   heart in a rush

 

Her hair captures my hands in a silken twirling brook

wandering through her wants and mine at twin time

                   such a shine

 

Her excited interest perfumes her smile

sweetly coaxing stories of nonsense to brighten my face

                   I want to know

 

Her voice terrifies my name and respells it

a delicious song of sexy insatiable calm

                   my soul’s rebel

 

Her lips sketch my unseen lines with appreciation’s ink

well without expectation yet colored with my quiver

                   now stress….wither

 

Her moans deliver the sweetest echoes like wind-blessed leaves

likened to the moment pleasure itself self sneezed gently

                   once again please

 

 

Her pleading affirmation wears iteration on each sleeve

and as our forever tells her Ill never leave, I taste…

                   sweet Monday morning

Reviews

[Yereziah]

Music and Love...need I say more...I love this

[Literary Queen Na Tasha..]

Lovely poem deep and pure...espression! Everyone wants a man to feel this way about them and break her down in these pieces! Good write!

[Rie Sheridan Rose]

Lovely poem. A great tribute to love. Is there a reason behind the first verse being past tense and all the rest present? Just asking, because the rest of the poem is much more immediate than the first verse. Using the present tense makes us more connected to the portrait. A couple of places where the verb and noun agreement seems awkward, but nothing major. On the whole, quite a nice read -- the love shines through. :)