Letter To WHO...

 

I know I love WHO but I don’t know what to say

WHO drives my every breath along each stressful day

I look at WHO and fear chokes my truth

I look at ME and circumstance molds my youth

and that mold carries weight

that mold shapes my fate

and somehow WHO always sneaks in

but I know if I pursue WHO I’ll probably hurt WHO in the end

so perfect is my fear

                        that I’ll latch on to comfort

                                    no matter

           the pain

mine or WHO cause I know the possible peace

but I know the possible war

                        Not the one with WHO but the one in me

Can I love WHO? Should I tell WHO?

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

You have a creative skill and flow in the way you convey your emotions in this
wonderful 'Letter to WHO'.

"so perfect is my fear
that I’ll latch on to comfort
no matter
the pain"


Fear is only perfect if one is not willing to look for it's imperfections

Love this write so much..... :O)


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[illest]

YO I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM... I LIKE HOW U STRUCTURE ALL YOUR POEMS...I ESPECIALLY LIKE THE IDEA OF THE NAME BEING A WHO... WETHER YOU DID IT TO REMAIN ANONYMOUS OR TO PUT EMPHASIS ON IT...EITHER WAY IT WORKS OUT GOOD