I love you

A lover telling his or her partner how she feels without him or her.

I love you

Babe I love you, I need you in my heart.
I realise, our love is taken for granted,
You and I misused an opportunity,
in our last life.
 

But babe, I am here, right now, to make it right. Will you
Give me a chance to love you? And
can you love me the way I want you to?
I know you are nodding positively and you
shimmer with my question amour.
 

I want you. I am not denying my heart yearns for
you. I just need you to hold me tonight
and lets join together in paradise.
 

Reviews

[Michael X]

love this poem bumni, its sensual as warmth created by two lover's embracing under moonlight on a cool summer night, your metaphorically enhanced perception is rendered with silky effect, thoughts feel as if they are being traced by a feather, the concept of being lovers in a last lifes, to dream in paradise, rate says 93.08, but i clicked 100

" I want you. I am not denying my heart yearns for
you. I just need you to hold me tonight
and lets join together in paradise.

the sparklingly peaceful graphic of birds chirping in branches, full bloom, your work flows straight to
heart with whispered effect, perfect sensuous, and draws the reader into fantasy's yearning, ahh,
leaves the soul yearning, gorgeous, one could get lost in your words, and who would want to leave? not me

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A lovely romantic write. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[ANNA]

This is a beautiful poem..Makes me want to cry a little..but its good..warm, enhacing felling!
I like to read love poem. Tell me it still out there some where..I loved the part when you wrote
*Give me a chance to love you? And
can you love me the way I want you to?
I know you are nodding positively and you
shimmer with my question amour.*
I don't why yet but it made me smile
Great poem

Anna