Becoming

When the sun falls
And the stars arrive
There are these things
That stir in me.

My mind digs in
The darkest holes.
Trying to create
This Hades.

When will these horrors
Ever end?
When will the sun
rise up again?

My heart is slowly
Sinking in.
I am finally becoming,
Him.

Author's Note

I wrote this for a book I am writing and it was kind of written it fast. Hope you enjoy!

Reviews

[Athera Rose]

Really like this very good sense of flow and rhythm. Love the mysterious dark theme and the last stanza is my favorite. Great job :)

[Bumble]

Thank you!

[B-poet]

Very poignant and emphatic. Theirs a very deep meaning within the essence of your poem thats being conveyed in a perfect way. Great write. I really love this one. :)

[Bumble]

Thank you! n_n

[Taylor]

I really liked this! The first stanza was awesome. I love that, at least from what I've seen, you do a lot of dark poetry.

[Bumble]

Thank you! I can't seem to do a love of "love" poems lol.

[Butters]

I like this alot! I'd rather read poetry about something dark over the traditaioal "Love" theme any day of the week!

[Bumble]

Thank you! And I agree! n_n

[That_Guy]

I love the opening stanza. Dark and interesting, well done

[Bumble]

Thank you n_n

[That_Guy]

;)

[Dr. Wood ?]

The word horror..should be plural...But I write poems within books and This was very dark and also interesting..makes for a good book

[Bumble]

Thank you and thank you! :D

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow, very dark and surreal and beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

[Bumble]

Thank you. And you are welcome. n_n