Captured

A dark room.
Behind a door.
Calling for anyone.
Death is near.
Even with a strong soul.
Fear lingers.
Gruesome images fill her sweet mind.
Hell is almost over.
Ignoring the screams.
Jougs tightly restraining her to stay still.
Kirtle lay on her bare legs.
Lights on.
Men with beards and tattoos walk in.
No one makes a sound.
Oil runs over her naked body.
Pushed in.
Quivering in pain.
Rough at first.
Soft in the end.
They leave, but him.
Under the leader.
Virginity gone to a barbarian.
Wife she will be.
Xeransis her soul.
Yearning for an escape.
Zitella no longer.

Author's Note

ABC poetry. First time ever doing on of these. Plus, it's a bit on the young adult side.

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

oh s**t I didn't noticed that. I've never heard of an ABC poem that is cool as hell!! You did great!! I like it. Gonna put it in my library.

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D

[Athera Rose]

This is amazing, love it :)

[Bumble]

Thank you!

[Brittany DeFranco]

Wow, I love it!! I hope you write more
100/100

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D I had wrote one last night and I thought I saved it, but when I went go look for it, it wasn't there! D: But I might write one tonight. Lol

[Brittany DeFranco]

yay!!

[Allycat]

I love how this is alphabetical and it still flows so nicely! Excellent job

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D

[Belinda]

UGHH!!! I can never do these! so kudos for just that! good job!

[Bumble]

Thank you! Lol

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I've never done an ABC poem before but I think you done a truly lovely job with this! The title goes well along with the poem. I think it's sad because events, like described in your poem, actually do happen in our society these days. Well even globally! To be honest, I don't think I'd be able to accomplish a poem such as this, but you sure did. Great job, and keep up the wonderful work! I look forward to reading and reviewing more of your work in the future, too. :)

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Bumble]

Thank you!! :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

You're welcome :)

[Bumble]

I have never done an ABC poem either, this was really a great piece, It flowed and I just really enjoyed it! Thank you,.... I think I need to try this now! :-)

[Bumble]

Thank you and you should! It was really fun to do:D

Your very welcome, & Thank you, it seems like it would, my mind is racing! :)

[Bumble]

You are welcome! :D

[Chris]

Takes thought to use the whole alphabet... even names can be hard to see.

[Bumble]

Thank you. And names?

[Chris]

I stand properly corrected... well researched Bumble.

[Bumble]

Its okay:) and thank you. :)

[JuniperPearl]

I have always enjoyed writing with some sort of word prompt. I think you did an excellent job here. You have expanded my vocabulary a bit (that's what the prompts always almost make you do, lol) and I enjoy that. Good job.

[Bumble]

Thank you :) I find going out of my normal ways of writing hinders me from learning. And my vocabulary grew 3 words! Lol