Autumn

Red, yellow, brown leaves under my feet.
Hop to another one, crunch.
The sound makes me giggle.

Cold wind upon my face.
Hoodie up, sleeves down.
My soul shivers with delight.

Hot coco, warm coffee.
Hands wrapped around the mug.
Warmth spreads like fire through my veins.

Author's Note

This is how I feel about Autumn. :D

Reviews

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

This is why I love forests, Sunshine is great but in autumn all of your senses get attacked and a walk through the forest can bring you and the world back to life.

[Bumble]

I agree fully! Autumn brings something out of me...but whatever it is I like it!

[Brittany DeFranco]

I love Autumn and Spring because of the cool fresh air and flowers and herbs that I can grow, This poem made me smile ^_^
100/100

[Bumble]

Thank you and I am glad I could make you smile! :D

[JuniperPearl]

Autumn is my second favorite season, just after winter. "My soul shivers with delight."
--Great line. Pretty much sums up how I feel about it! Nice work!! :)

[Bumble]

Thank you! :D

[Bare Trees]

You did a fine job in relating your love for Autumn, also my favorite season. Hot coco with hands wrapped around the mug is something I always look forward to as well. The last line is so well perceived.

Nice writing.

Pendragon

[Bumble]

Thank you. :)

[Bare Trees]

You're welcome Bumble.

[CLUTZ]

I have a love hate relationship with Fall, I love the colors and all the wonderful things that go with Halloween but I hate the cold & living in Michigan doesn't help. Ramble over, I really like this. It brings back memories from childhood and you capture a lot of what fall is like for a lot of kids, when things were simple.

[Bumble]

Thank you! I would love to live up north and get away from this heat!

[CLUTZ]

You're welcome:) & I think I should have been born in the south the way I react to cold. I was born here and my mom was born in the south and she loves the seasons and the cold. I think maybe we should have been born in each others home towns.

[Bumble]

LOL! I know! The south can get pretty and actually stay cool, but that is on rare occasions.

[Allycat]

LOVE THIS! :D Autumn is by far my favorite season, and reading this brings me to October when the leaves are falling and changing colors :)
excellent write :)

[Bumble]

Thank You! :D

[Sami Khalil]

My soul shivers with delight ... That is a nice line...

[Bumble]

Thank you!

[Laura E. Aranda]

i read it as if i am reading to my six year old daughter. she would enjoy this very much

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I just love autumn... the colors, the smells and it has just a certain feel to it after a hot summer... I love how you'd described it... a great tease to the upcoming season.

[Bumble]

:D Thank you! :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Welcome :)

[zainul]

Very lovely feeling about Autumn

[Bumble]

Thank you :)

[zainul]

You are very welcome