Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by Bumble

Red, yellow, brown leaves under my feet.
Hop to another one, crunch.
The sound makes me giggle.

Cold wind upon my face.
Hoodie up, sleeves down.
My soul shivers with delight.

Hot coco, warm coffee.
Hands wrapped around the mug.
Warmth spreads like fire through my veins.


© 2012 Bumble


Author's Note

Bumble
This is how I feel about Autumn. :D

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This is why I love forests, Sunshine is great but in autumn all of your senses get attacked and a walk through the forest can bring you and the world back to life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

I agree fully! Autumn brings something out of me...but whatever it is I like it!
I love Autumn and Spring because of the cool fresh air and flowers and herbs that I can grow, This poem made me smile ^_^
100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank you and I am glad I could make you smile! :D
Autumn is my second favorite season, just after winter. "My soul shivers with delight."
--Great line. Pretty much sums up how I feel about it! Nice work!! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank you! :D
You did a fine job in relating your love for Autumn, also my favorite season. Hot coco with hands wrapped around the mug is something I always look forward to as well. The last line is so well perceived.

Nice writing.

Pendragon

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Relic's Bare Trees

12 Years Ago

You're welcome Bumble.
I have a love hate relationship with Fall, I love the colors and all the wonderful things that go with Halloween but I hate the cold & living in Michigan doesn't help. Ramble over, I really like this. It brings back memories from childhood and you capture a lot of what fall is like for a lot of kids, when things were simple.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank you! I would love to live up north and get away from this heat!
CLUTZ

12 Years Ago

You're welcome:) & I think I should have been born in the south the way I react to cold. I was born .. read more
Bumble

12 Years Ago

LOL! I know! The south can get pretty and actually stay cool, but that is on rare occasions.
LOVE THIS! :D Autumn is by far my favorite season, and reading this brings me to October when the leaves are falling and changing colors :)
excellent write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank You! :D
My soul shivers with delight ... That is a nice line...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank you!
i read it as if i am reading to my six year old daughter. she would enjoy this very much

Posted 12 Years Ago


I just love autumn... the colors, the smells and it has just a certain feel to it after a hot summer... I love how you'd described it... a great tease to the upcoming season.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

:D Thank you! :D
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

12 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Very lovely feeling about Autumn

Posted 12 Years Ago


Bumble

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)
zainul

12 Years Ago

You are very welcome

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Added on September 9, 2012
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Tags: Autumn, Coco, Coffee, Crunchy leaves

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Bumble

Lydia, LA



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