Winter, and the meaning of life.

Sometimes the coldest of seasons can bring the warmest kind of love.

Remember the moon that lit up the night

the day we learned, the meaning of life?

 

Your hand was in mine, your lips held a secret

We battled together, as hope lit our stars

 

We were a force, unlike any other

Our love a blanket, in the cold

 

It was the dead of winter, the coldest of seasons

But it brought us romance, and taught us of love

 

Leaves every color buried beneath, snow so white

As two children found, the love of their life

 

Each day I remember that snow fall, and our winter love

And hope wherever you are, you think of us too

 

Even in the heat of the summer

I take out the blanket, you once gave me

 

To keep me warm throughout the winter

And to remind me of you, when my thoughts grew cold

 

I heard you got married, sometime last month

I’m happy you’re happy, but I miss your warmth

 

The stars seem to lose, their golden fire

Ever since the day, spring sent you far away

 

Tonight I will dream, of our winter love

And the moon that lit, that peaceful night

As together we learned, the meaning of life… 

Reviews

[Kate]

This is a really beautiful poem ... It nearly made me cry because of the fact that she's holding onto their past but can never have a future with him. It brought up a lot of emotion. Fantastic write!!!!!!

[Domo]

This is beautiful, one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read. This poem was fulfilling and delightful. The meaning of the words seep in and leave a scar.
Great write.

[talulu love]

wow... alot of meaning behind it ...good job

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Aww this is really sweet. I do believe love is the meaning of life, and this poem just screams it. Its also really sad, cause he got married to somebody else... So sad. I don't think that should have happened, especially if they found the meaning of life in each other. I hope this didn't happen to you. But sometimes, tradety inspires the best poetry. Fantastic job :D

[Jessica]

ok, this did make me cry..this was very touching, and i loved the rhyming

[Poeticpiers]

Most expressive.Rousing old memories in most readers I would think. The emotions shine through deliver in non rhyming couplets but still flows smoothly

[Manda]

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is beautiful! i cried! it was so cute, sad and emotional. i felt the girl as if it was me! awww! i hope this didnt happen to you. this was very well written and descriptive. the choice of words and punctuation was very good =) this is my favorite write of yours so far!!!!! and i am glad i got to read and review it! omg i really love this!!!!!!!!!!! ugh!!!!!!!! great job! please keep it up!