Your Presence

I shield my eyes, But i cant look away
I hide my smile, But it finds its way
I try to forget, But you still stay
In my heart, Forever you sway
You make me reach, in a hopeful way
Only to apart from my solemn pray

Reviews

[CityKitty323]

Lovely!
And so relatable as well

[Raivenne]

Nice rhythm. It slides smoothly across the tongue.

[Joe]

This is a really good poem. The rhythm and repitition really help the piece flow. GReat job! Keep it up!