Chasing Fireflies

Adrenaline rampaging through your body

Eagerly racing through time

Body shaking with anticipation

It’s that feeling you get

When chasing fireflies

And finally catch one.

It's that feeling you get

when chasing fireflies.

Adrenaline rampaging through your body

Body shaking with anticipation

Eagerly racing through time.

and finally, you catch one.

Author's Note

Which is better? the first, second or neither?

Reviews

[Aeternal Oceanfire]

I think the first is better. It flows more. A very nice short poem.