Magnificent Bubble

this is just kind of a really random poem...

Hello there,

You beautiful contraption

 

Your radiance and color

sparkle in the sun

your circular shape

floating only for an instant

capture the attention,

and bring upon wonder

of so many young ones

Then it's your time to leave

 

Goodbye then,

You magnificent bubble

Reviews

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

haha. I used to write poems about bubbles too, though i never wrote them down. I love bubbles. And you know what's funny? Thats the screen saver on my computer! What a cute poem. Hilarious.

[A]

Love this! It brought a smile to my face :) It's short and sweet and I really like the uplifting feel to it. Great poem :)

[Wolfe Greytome]

I like this. Its pure, its simple - kinda like a bubble. A wonderful piece.