Look to the stars

This is somthing I wrote today after spending some time with someone where time is limited. Someone i havnt seen in a very long time and while im still learning to manage my feelings

There are moments in life that are bitter but sweet
They come by not offen when moments do meet
To real and heavy so hard to understand
A feeling that great from just the touch of a hand
Its moments like this that bring you to life
They cut you in deep like the blade of a knife
Though the moment is short but with lasting effect
remeberd forever the warmth of your breath
How long will this story continue to grow
Life has a way of letting you know
Being that close it happend so fast
Ill always see you when I look to the stars

Author's Note

Ive never had any writing experience other than the ramblings ive written down to help the repeating words to leave my mind

Reviews

[Lea Sheryn]

I enjoyed reading your poem. There is a good rhythym in it. It makes me wish I could write poetry. It also tells me why I should stick to prose.