I'll Eat You First

I'll Eat You First

A Poem by Bryad Polis Valentino
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Spiritual, a myth made into reality. The snake admires his chosen meal most.

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The free and the wild,

 

Birds in the sky,

 

Flying each and every way,

 

Spirits of the wind,

 

Going high before they descend.

 

 

I want to admire them,

 

Not shoot them down,

 

Watch them go to die.

 

 

Free bird, home to your soul,

 

How I admire you,

 

As I’m a snake in the tree,

 

Sacrifice to me,

 

I ate you first,

 

Tastiest meal I’ll find,

 

In my stomach, die,

 

I shot you down anyways,

 

Why’d I love you?

 

You little stupid meal.

© 2019 Bryad Polis Valentino


Author's Note

Bryad Polis Valentino
"The serpent was what he became. My friend devoured his prey, having no choice as he starved. He forced out the one hiding, and she immediately engaged him. The slayer guarded himself, his flesh breaking beneath the onslaught. Bryan braced himself, remembering Yennefer's warning.."

-The Bard's Tales, copyright Bryan Varner/BP Lovecraft, can be republished as long you state me as the original author.

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I wanted to admire those birds, but couldn't fly, thinking like a snake at the time, a infiltrator, a survivor, a desert-sidewinder. Thanks for reading, my pagan bro! If you need anything, let me know. Anything.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Seems cold, but I like it. Simple matter of fact tone and words. No need to be flowery or verbose. Sometimes it's better to say what you mean to get the point across.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on April 17, 2019
Last Updated on April 17, 2019
Tags: Fantasy, Spiritual, Confession

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Bryad Polis Valentino
Bryad Polis Valentino

Spokane, WA



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I was once called the seeker of truth but abandoned my way to learn how to show mercy. What I discovered was a gentle side with intense emotions. I refused to call myself evil, but feared that I indee.. more..

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