Cracked

Just a crack
A crack in an
Old bridge,
Staring into
A river that
Holds a million
memories...
Floating down
The river in your
Sweet embrace.
Do you love me?
I loved you.
Maybe, just maybe..
I still do.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

wow!......I'm speechless to the point that I'm debating whether my "repetition" comment is personal or legitimate.......wow!

[Derek Nall]

Ooo, I like the imagery and the metaphor! Floating down the river of your sweet embrace. Great job!