Hail Mary

I love you, I love you, I love you.

Never thought it’d happen again.

Fell for a boy once, now it’s right.

This time I fell for a man.
You say it’ll be me and you forever,

Lord, how I’d love for it to never end.


The giddy sensation, the tingling,
&
The cheeks as red as Mary,
Mary what's her name?
Another sinner.. Relieved.
Mary Magdalene, a sinner and saint.


The way my eyes light up like stars,
my lights restored on a dark night.
Giving me faith to find my way home,
I've journeyed long and far.
Searching for the right path.
I'm asking you to lead me into the right.

He turns me into a school girl.
I feel as if I am,
Giving the confession of my first kiss
It's happening all over again...
Confessing my Glory and my sins.
Lord I love you, my salvation&savior.
Is it a sin to love him this much?

Ten Hail Mary's? Name the price.
Make me pure, worthy.
Lord I pray make me worthy.
Worthy of the love he gives.
He sends me his love confessions

& I hope I’m worthy to receive.

Lord he makes me want to…
To be better, deserving, more.

Do I deserve the love I’m given?

You gave me reason, to believe.

My faiths restored and I’m blessed.

Is it right lovin’ someone this much?

If loving is a sin, call me hopeless.

Tonight like every night, I pray.
I pray not for more, for I am blessed.
But for it to last, last a lifetime.
Or as long as you have planned.
Father, I need you now.
Stop the devil in his tracks,
for I can not handle any more tests of faith.
My love for you is unbreakable,
But I only want the light,
overthrow the darkness. Amen.

Author's Note

First time I've really ever used religion in expression. Let me know what you think. It's from the heart and I didn't have a very set rhythm

Reviews

[Nick.B]

Very emotional with a nice rhythm attached to it, the message was very clear in this one....not a very religious person, maybe there's something out there, not like the say it is, but something...anyway great job

[BryanaBear]

I agree, I'm not a religious person but I believe in a higher power but I was raised a catholic

[Derek Nall]

I'm not really religious at all so I can't really relate to it in that aspect but I feel a sense of strong emotion and even without a set rhythm it flows very well. Can tell it's from the heart and I admire that...good poem :)

[BryanaBear]

thanks!