Out Of Town

At times, living in the city is just to much for this country boy . I have to get Out Of Town.

        Out Of Town

                             Out of town is a splendid place,
                             no exhaust fumes, from cars that race.
    
                            The greens are greener, and blues bluer
                            the aroma in the field is of cow manure .

                            I can breath, I can breath,wide open space,
                            out of town is a splendid place.

                            Fresh cut hay , I love that smell,
                            not at all like the concrete hell.

                            Walking,  through the fields i adore,
                            looking into the sky, watching a hawk as he soars.

                            Fishing in a pond you don't need your mace.
                            out of town is a splendid place.

                            Sun going down now , wow what a sight,
                            mixing of colors, makes my soul delight.

                            Stars shinning bright in the darkness of night.
                            All this is hidden in the big city lights.

                            Surrounded by  God and all of His Grace.
                            Out of town is a splendid place.
                            

                          
                     

                        

Reviews

[Brianna]

sounds very relaxing and it makes me really want to go where you go out of town :p And also, it had a very nice flow and the rhyming was great :)
Thanks for an awesome :)
~Chey

[Poetic Beauty]

I am glad I don't live in a concrete jungle. I love flowers and plants too much. I like being able to step out into my backyard and feel the grass between my toes. You have described this desire quite nicely.

[R J Askew]

Great stuff, I love it. It's simple and easy, but all the better for that. I love that first step on a walk when you get off the road and tread onto a footpath through a field.

[Ruth]

The countryside can be a beautiful place...especially when we need a break :) Beautifully written love xx

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Lovely rhyme and meter..and I totally agree with you..I love the countryside

[LinBin]

So well put together, I can picture this, it's a great piece of writing. x

[Kat]

I feel like I'm back in Ohio!

[HeIsWe]

this is really good. when i was reading this it actually felt like i was out of town in the middle of a field.

[realmwriter]

Im at a computer in the middle of a field out of town now, Thank you for that!

[Enigma]

You took me there right in the middle of the field and shared all the scenes that delighted you so. Amazing journey my friend. And amazing poem. Would like to go to such places again and again.