Set Me Free

Living in His will ,comes with a price !

              Set Me Free

                           Walking in His will can be times of a , silent fate
                           Feeling the pain of a an echoed gait .
                           Oh doing  His work on a silent road.
                           Waiting for the harvest of the seeds I`d sowed.
 
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh set me free.
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh set me free.
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh set me free.
                           Set me free Father,
                           oh please set me free Father, of what i know as ME.

                          Oh a empty heart,and an aching  soul.
                          The peeling away of HIS truth untold.
                          Screaming out into the heavenly skies.
                          For believing all of the enemies  lies.

                          Set me free Father,
                          oh set me free.
                          Set me free Father,
                          oh set me free.
                          Set me free Father,
                          oh set me free.
                          Set me free Father,
                          oh please set me free Father, of what i know as ME.

                          He covered me with His loving grace,
                          and His heart felt love.
                          It descended down upon me,
                          from heaven above.
                          My chains have been broken.
                          I am shackled no more.
                          Freedom from the Father,
                          and His love i adore.
                       
                          Thank you for the peace,
                          Father.
                          Thank you for the peace,
                          Father.
                          Thank you for the peace,
                          Father.
                          Once i surrendered the LIE, to You,
                          my pain began to cease,
                          my pain began to cease.
                       

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

amen. This is a great stand alone poem but I would love to hear it sung. So many great poets take their gift and give it out to the wider audience - craving that validation but when i read a great poet who is giving that gift back to the Giver of All Great Gifts, it gives me hope. Well penned.

[Don Shaw]

Thank you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This tells the tale well the addiction need not be the end and we all have it within us to fight it.

[Archangel Gabriel]

Indeed a moving and powerful piece with an uplifting story to tell. Read like a song with tight verses and a chorus. Everyone has to believe in something but true faith starts with belief in self and responsibility for the actions we take or fail to take.

[Sheila Kline]

Certainly a worthy plea to the only ONE who can truly set us free!!! I hope you are having these put to music - your lyrics are wonderful!!
Let us all commit ourselves to be free to know the joy of our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ!!

[Don Shaw]

Yes Sheila they are being put to music. The first cd is almost done, probably this week then on to number two. Thank you for reading and the review .

[Sheila Kline]

That is wonderful to hear!! Please share with me when the cd is done and I will buy one! Prayers for you!!

[Angel]

Set me free, Father...
Oh, yes...that has been my song, as well. Satan had me well and truly chained, in chains he had crafted from my own ego...
You have told It so beautifully, so perfectly! I couldn't have done a better job myself.
Now all we need are the little black dots (musical score)...

[Don Shaw]

thank you so much

[Rita L. Sev]

oh please set me free Father, of what i know as ME...

We are so often our own worst enemy, and embracing grace is the remedy! Lyrical write of great faith, ready to be set to music. Well penned, Don!

[Don Shaw]

Thank you Rita.