Unanswered Questions

Unanswered Questions

A Poem by BrotherJackman
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When your with someone you notice the feelings they have for you are painting pictures for you, & you watch as those pictures change brightness, clarity, color & size, your images for them change too.

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What are your plans in life?

Am I included in them?

Why do you have to leave?

Can I come with you?

What's out there for you?

Have I not been there for you?

Why are you pulling away?

Am I holding on to tight?

Why don't you care for me as much as I do for you?

Should I care less for you?

Do you feel alone?

Will I ever fill the empty space?

Is the present too dark? Is the future too bright?

Am I just a grey area in your life?

 

You are forever in my heart.

Am I in yours? 

© 2012 BrotherJackman


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Agree with vengeance. The last couple of lines give the poem a pretty neat finish.

P.S. - When I saw the title of the poem I expected something along the lines of the Ultimate Questions that remained unanswered in the Hitchhiker's guide to the Galaxy.. ;) he he..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great emotions tied into this piece,I can very much agree with all these questions when I am with someone.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's the questions I'd like someone I love. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 16, 2011
Last Updated on January 23, 2012

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BrotherJackman
BrotherJackman

Seattle, WA



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