Time Bomb

Tick

I’ve been waiting for you for what seems like forever

Tock

My patience is wearing thin

Tick

A time bomb is about to go off

Tock

The clock won’t stop

Tick

Time is never on our side

Tock

My breathing slows with every clock-beat

Tick

Hurry up, you have to save me

Tock

Quickly make me forget 

Tick

Before I do something I’ll regret 

Tock

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

amazing . great stuff thanks for sharing

[Laura3841]

How creative! This poem makes you feel nervous when reading it, which I believe is the point. Great job!

[Laura Lynn]

cool poem, every one is just on the edge of such anger, we have to slow down and count to ten! I really get the feeling of a time bomb and the tick tock of the clock or the timer that is