Progression

Progressive, That's what i thought too, But i see we haven't made any, that's why i left you behind. You've made time for your job and your family, but what about me? That's what i failed to see, Lines and numbers all add up, now i see the picture i should have seen long ago, the big picture.. that's what they call it, when your staring at the entire thing you see how bad it's painted, who even thought of this? it is just another bad metaphor used in a hopeless situation. I see everything must be working out for you so when you read this let's hope we don't meet face to face because i resent you.

I won't remember who you are or what you've done.but i will know well enough to stay far away from you. You've had and you've lost, it's time to own up to your mistakes, i thought to tell you, "If you love me show me", but if you don't.. then continue as you are.. we have little time together, we don't talk as much, we don't laugh, i am not happy.. you say i make you happy but you can't be happy.  

Don't you think about me? don't you like talking to me? why do i have to wait day's to talk to you? what about me.. what's so important that you have to put me on hold for day's, You don't message me any more, to ask me how i am, to see what my day was like. I feel this cold love and its making me sick, i want you to be the one for me.

i want you to be the person i spend the rest of my life with but how can i when you don't try to spend time together, I have said this so many times and continued to repeat it.
"I don't want to do this again!!".

Reviews

[Brooksfield]

Thank you for reading, I just wrote what I felt, I hope it helps someone else out and maybe they can salvage their relationship with the one they love, I realize that there isn't a manual for a relationship but hopefully it helps or gives you an idea of how to deal with it after. Thank you again and please look forward to future poems/stories.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wow so powerful and deep, really written from the heart. Letting all your emotions run out onto paper.
Very full of emotion indeed.
Sad and heartbreaking piece.
Really sorry you are getting hurt, and someone is treating you this way.
Great write, written straight from the heart clearly.
Keep writing :)

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I love this piece, I love how you were able to capture the essence of this situation, of fading apart so well. Though it kinda feels like this was written for me from someone I did this exact thing to (I regret it every day, I swear) but I've also been through this, so I see both sides and it kills me to read this and think "damn, I forgot about that," and "exactly" as the piece went on. Anyway, I've already told you I don't mean to rant and I swear that is still true. Greatly penned piece. Amazing use of style and honesty. I like where you placed your capitalized "I"s because it makes them stand out and shows more of your personality and the importance of those lines above some of the others.

[Brooksfield]

Thank you again, i would have gotten back to your review a little earlier but the website wasn't loading, had to restart my computer, download an update, and then it showed up fine. First i would like to say that this piece is about the love of my life, or she would have been, the cold truth is we faded months ago, she kept telling me i was the one for her, the love of her life, the only one that deserved her, but she cheated, she had broken every ounce of trust i had in her, i don't remember much about why i wanted to write this but i do know that there is so many woman who wonder where the good men are, you look closely to those that throw their hearts on the ground, that have been though just as much, but they are turned down and it hurts because they give up on what is called love and they become those men you'd hate to love but find yourself in their arm's rejecting the good ones that would throw their jacket over a puddle of water for you over one that would make you walk home in the rain, this is one of those stories.