Classic Excuse

Classic Excuse

A Poem by Brooksfield
"

About a past woman in my life.

"
As i stand alone, I watch you with another man. I asked you what was wrong. You never reply; I missed you back then, But i'm glad it didn't work out, I think about it now and i realize you was always a liar, You couldn't be honest and you never could be. you could tell me you loved me with out giving me an excuse to not let me care for you. Our ages maybe different. But that meant nothing to me an you know it. even after you called me out an watched me stand on the outside,but you know you taught me a lesson. Now i can't trust anyone an its all your fault. i can't be in a perfect realtionship and not want to run away because you always ran from me. It's not easy knowing you loved me but couldnt stand and wait for me after all i try to do for you, You couldn't stay awake even if it meant we would be able to talk. AN it pains me to much that you were so sure about everything except what was reasonable. I know we had differences but though it all we couldn't have atleast been friends. i know it wouldn't work even today.  You never write or call, It's just a matter of time before your back again to expect me to mend your wounds. I hope that your happy an what ever your doing, your taking care of what you worked your whole life for. and i understand that. I'll be waiting for that text, until then.. 

© 2012 Brooksfield


Author's Note

Brooksfield
I'm not completely finshed with this, Will go back and make changes. it seems a bit. blah, It's 11:16pm. give me a break brah...

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Wow It seems as though this woman has put you through allot of pain.
I can't believe how deep your pieces are.
Another painful heartbreaking write.
I am sorry that some girls don't treat the good guys with the respect they deserve.
I hope your heart has healed now, and that you find someone amazing.
I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Brooksfield

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it, I see that you have read a few of my poems and I'm glad you like them, als.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

Your welcome :) sure av. Yer writing is an awesome way to get your feelings out.
Interesting. It was like going through the journey of your mind with it's every thought as it's happening.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brooksfield

12 Years Ago

Thank you so much, When i wrote this i was thinking how much that past experience consumed me. I sai.. read more

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

205 Views
2 Reviews
Added on November 22, 2012
Last Updated on November 22, 2012

Author

Brooksfield
Brooksfield

Lawton, OK



About
I'm Thirty-Three years old from Oklahoma. I'm 5'11 in height. brown hair, It grew out and now I've cut it short and dyed it blonde in my pfp. also I'm also not very fond of pictures So the one in my .. more..

Writing