Doubtfulness

Been freaking out about something. Keep trying to find an answer but they are all unsure responses.

I can't begin to think or even speak.

So please excuse these words for being weak.

My mind is drowning in hopeless thoughts.

My spirit once bright has now gloomily dropped.

I've kept a positive light in each tunnel.

But as my body starts to fade away and rumble

the wind seems to have blew the light out.

Now I'm sitting alone in the darkness with these heavy doubts.

How could it be my number one fear is creeping up on me?

Marking it's way into my heart.

Peeling the edges while the seams come apart.

I'm slowly drowning in fear.

My one and only hope I have too far to be near.

What will come of me if it may be true.

Will I accomplish all the dreams I've made

or be left to weep undue.

Who am I say that I don't deserve this.

I could have swore though I wasn't on karmas hit-list      

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

I love the frankness of your poetic lines...to the point, with your emotions, yet I can feel the uncertainty of the situation. Nice share.