Dreamer

Dreamer

A Poem by Brooke Miller
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More upbeat. On a positive note.

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Stronger and lightly fighting.
Holding down hopes and searching out light.
Becoming something I never dreamed of being.
Standing here blindly seeing.
I am someone.
I am dreaming.
Can't a lay a finger on prices or hope.
One day I'll make a show.
Scream out things I've held inside.
Show the world I've been alive.
Have faces see the one they ignored.
Show them all I am something more.

© 2011 Brooke Miller


Author's Note

Brooke Miller
Ignore the over use of periods and capitalization please.

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You have something more, and in time, that will grow, as you keep writing, as you keep fighting...just keep on truckin. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Beautiful! Lovely poem and good matching title. Well Done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yay to positivity! I love the feeling of ambition in this write. Makes me want to dream. Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brooke Miller
Brooke Miller

Ocala, FL



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I'm a Caucasian, eight-teen year old girl who lives in Florida. I have high hopes and low dreams. I really want to get a book or novel published before I pass away. I have a great sense of humor and d.. more..

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