The Island of DesperationA Story by Brooke<3Reynolds There was once a woman inhabiting an island hundreds of miles off the coast of Argentina. The island’s embedded greenery was unfathomably vivid and perfectly balanced with a spectrum of tropical flowers. There was only one thing missing; her beloved. Her beloved lay deceased on the mossy, fertile soil of the island. She wept besides his decaying corpse daily yearning for his resurrection, but it never came. One day, while longing for her beloved’s return; several spirits arose from the still, abandoned waters and stood next to the woman. The woman lifted her proverbial weights and found herself stunned by the spirits’ aberrant presence. “We have come to bring Adam home,” the lead spirit informed with ethereal eloquence. At first the woman’s thoughts were tangled with puzzlement, but as soon as the spirits began to carry her beloved’s body, her thoughts became untangled and were brimming with loss and heartbreak. “What are you doing?! Get your hands off of him?!,” The woman interjected emphatically. “We have to bring Adam home.” “His home is here! He belongs with me!” she said firmly. “The time has come to let go, miss... Let go.” The spirit said in a delicate whisper. The woman let the spirits claim her most treasured possession on the island. She painfully glanced behind a towering palm tree as the spirits submerged into the abysmal waters with her beloved. The woman found herself experiencing emotional anguish. She could no longer ignore the agony. She had to search for a solution to cope. When the spirits were completely out of sight, the woman ran through the island, weeping and shoving dewy leaves from her path. After running through a mile of leafy wonders, she found a circular piece of empty land. The woman approached the center of the land and sat herself down in a fetal position. Hysterical and hopeless, she got up and accidentally stepped on something sharp. She grasped onto the sharp object and found the solution to cope. © 2010 Brooke<3ReynoldsFeatured Review
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1 Review Added on December 22, 2010 Last Updated on December 22, 2010 AuthorBrooke<3ReynoldsBurbank, CAAboutHi:) I'm an aspiring young writer in high school and is planning to become a renowned author someday. My passions include writing (of course;) and basketball. Have an awesome day and keep on writing!:.. more..Writing
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