Closer

Closer to me. I'm scared with out you. I can't watch you die, you're killing your self. Closer to the years. Closer to you. Closer to being in a mental house. You make me go crazy. Closer to you. Watch you waste your life away. Closer to you. Closer to death. Closer, closer, closer. Your like a virus, when I see you dieing it kills me. I know your keeping something from me. Closer. Vampire? You spread it from you to me. Thats what you've been keeping from me. Your not dieing your not a virus, your a vampire. Closer, closer, closer.

Reviews

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I really enjoyed this i really loved it toward the end when you were wrapping it up by saying "Your not dieing your not a virus, your a vampire. Closer, closer, closer." love those lines. Just one thing if you don't mind me saying dieing should be dying. Love this write it's wonderful.

[Owl City]

personally i think it needs to be rewritten

[*i.L.k.R^^4EVR*......]

i luv twilight. the books were awsome! i love your interpratation of there love.. great write

[gabby]

i like this poem it's so romantic