Dear complicated friend

Dear complicated friend ,

You confuse me
You excite me
You make me sad
You make me happy

I guess you could take this as admitting my feelings. But you'll never see this anyways.

I like you a lot but all youve ever done was play with my feelings and reel me back in every single time i try and let you go.
You complain about heartbreak but you know damn well if you gave me the chance i could treat you the best.

I would kiss you infront of everyone pining over me.
Id let people know im proud to have you.
Id show you what love felt like
Like the way i felt when we were a thing
Like the way i thought you felt before you left.

Its pointless to try with you but i do it anyways.

Giving up on you seems impossible.
Its ok though.
Im happy for you.

Love,
brooke.

Reviews

[Thepensiveplayer]

The feelings you expressed in this are incredible. It points out the frustrations we feel when we deal with someone we care for. The unsatisfaction we get from these situations is wild sometimes. On the inside I chuckled, because I've been in your spot personally and have gotten through it. Your not alone in your struggle and I know you can handle it. :) take care and keep writing.

[Onlyme]

Feelings of torment, love and confusion. Felt when someone gives you mixed messages. Done with such heartfelt emotions. Good read.

[barleygirl]

Very realistic portrayal of how a person might feel in this situation. Good use of details so the reader could see what was going on, what went on between these two. It's refreshing to see a love story or a heartbreak story told with all the ups & downs & contrasts that always come with true life, which makes your story in a poem sound realistic (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Winnter]

Thank you for the thoughts , and I should say this is a true story

[49k_jdys]

I really enjoyed this. It's very poignant and resonates with a familiar reminiscent feeling. It touched me in a way good writing does.