Rain

when you fall how does it feel, beautiful like a morning meal.

you crash,splash, hit the ground.

 

Your puddles is where my reflection is found.

 

When you fall does it make a noise?

 

soft like a babies toy.

 

A muggy smell fills the air,

 

Let it run through my hair. are you cold?

 

or only warm? beautiful summer storms,

 I look up,

 

there you fall creatures crawl.

 

You feed my earth are you ever hurt?

 

Hungry?sad? Lonely? tell me rain, do you feel pain?

Reviews

[sette]

it clearly describes what ran is all about and the awareness of it as a symbol for pain or sadness. this is a good poem

[Let her tell you]

thats what i was going for ;) THANK YOU!!

[sette]

you are welcome