That Feelings

It was when he touched me that i knew, 

i knew that things were genuine

and his love was true. 

It was when he kissed me that i figured,

he was the only man i ever wanted to 

kiss and i didn't want him to 

disappear. 

It was when he was gone that i was clear,

that i was brainwashed by artificial love

that had now resulted in tears. 

Love? No, not love. 

More like lust, but he just wanted 

someone to make him bust. 

Now i'm here, all alone...

Thinking about when i thought he was mine,

but really i was a waste of his time.

Withering in self pity here i cry, 

sometimes our feelings tell us lies.

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Reviews

[The Nude Writer]

Quite lovely! So well written!

[Brook]

Thank you :)

[Marcus]

Awesome piece, in some way I could relate to the words.

[Brook]

Thank you :) x

[Sandipan Majhi]

Some lines for you-

"Love is not love, woman
Without moments of red.
Tough as it seems, woman,
Feel that joy, even as you fade.
That joy, when eyes met,
And the first touches, you dealt.

Remember, those smiles, that slipped,
As your beats, floated on the freedom-wind.
Remember, how you danced in the rain,
And arms, that grabbed you from behind,
Just shy and eyes, closed,
Your head, rested on my chest,
And water-drops that hid some sweats,
Of some fear of dependence.
Yet the hearts kept beating,
That thirsty soul just kept going,
Because it was lonely no-more.

Only that stupid street light, does remember,
How our emotions slumbered, that night,
Facing each other.

What lives in time, lives forever,
Love's timeless, even for a dreamer."

[Kyle Wynn]

Very nicely written, I don't have much experience with relationships having only been in one roughly six or seven years ago, but I have seen friends deal with this kind of feeling before.

[Kyle Wynn]

You're welcome, it was my pleasure!

[lovergirl]

I loved this piece a lot (y) sorry for what happened maybe it wasn't meant to be ;)

[Brook]

Thank you for reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it!