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"I can't breathe without you." He said.

But there he was...

Breathing, 

Living, 

Smiling,

                                                              Without me.

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Short. Observational. Some resentment behind the words.
Good write.

[Brook]

Thanks for reading.

[s y e]

:( Sad but amazing, brook!!!

[Marcus]

Short and beautiful, this is awesome x

[Brook]

Thank you, Marcus. x

[Simon Welsh]

Beautiful as ever, hon. Nicely structured.

[Brook]

Thank you Elliott.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

The reality of life, though painful, but true. You strike a homerun with this one, Brook.

[Brook]

Thank you, Greg.

[Stefanie Holmes]

This piece hurts the heart. You penned your raw emotions beautifully in this piece. I, as the reader, truly feel the intense pain. Well done!

~Stefanie

[Brook]

Thank you, Stefanie.

[TheLastEclipse]

Gosh darn... (Because I am polite.)

I am one with powerful lengthy poems of passion, but this... agh! This is great. I was struck by it once I read it. There was so much passion in so few words. I enjoyed it... very much.

[Brook]

It's rare my poems are short, but lately that's all I'm doing. Guess it's a phase! Thank you for reviewing this, and taking the time to read it. I really appreciate it :)

[Luna Zerimar]

Damn.

I........damn.......

[Brook]

I'm hope this is a good damn! Thank you for reading it, Jess.

[Luna Zerimar]

It is a good "damn"! It left me breathless. Speechless!

But,

You're very welcome. (:

[TheLastEclipse]

This is about how I felt. It's so basic, but so passionate... Go empathy! :D

[Luna Zerimar]

Haha, yes. Empathy!