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A Poem by Brook

I am the butterflies in your stomach
when he first kissed your face, I am the
palpitations you felt when he touched your waist.

I am the make up around your eyes,
I rolled down your cheek mixed with tears
when he first told you those lies.

I am the hair band around your delicate
brunette hair, I kept the hair off your
face when he wanted to stare.

I am the paper that said divorce, I
am the feeling of remorse. I am the sadness,
The pain, and the bittersweet. I will disappear
when a new he decides it's you he will greet.

© 2014 Brook


Author's Note

Brook
Inspired by the movie Her.

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You have such a delicate, unique and artistic style of writing- it all flows together wonderfully.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I am the make up around your eyes,
I rolled down your cheek mixed with tears
when he first told you those lies.

I have not seen that movie, but as your description made me curious about it. Your art is very fine, and with deep emotions it made it more better. Love your writing dear. Send me more RR.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Brook

10 Years Ago

Thank you. :)

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Brook
Brook

Birmingham, United Kingdom



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